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Skeleton Island, curse of the Golden Skull

 

 

SKELETON ISLAND - Was a pirate secret location, known only to a small number of captains by that name. But as piracy became unfashionable with mass hangings, the numbers of those in the know, dwindled. Until, all that remained was a location carved in wood. Generally hidden somewhere safe by the pirate concerned. This location was useless without a chart giving the exact position that each pirate buried their stash. The maps made on parchment, were handed down to the next generations, by way of inheritance free of taxes.

 

 

 

 

 

<<< SCENE 14

 

 

SCENE: BETRAYAL AND TELEPATHIC WARNING

INT. BRIDGE - ELIZABETH SWANN - DAY


The bridge is a picture of calm efficiency. JOHN STORM sits at the central console, reviewing holographic schematics. DAN HAWK is at a secondary station, monitoring sensor readings. CLEOPATRA (40s, intelligent, resourceful) examines a sample of deep-sea coral under a holographic microscope. BLACK JACK (50s, burly, seemingly jovial) and BILLY BONES (30s, wiry, shifty-eyed) stand nearby, feigning interest in the ship's technology.

BLACK JACK: Fine vessel ye got here, Captain Storm. Smooth as a mermaid's tail, she is.

JOHN: Commander Storm, if you please. She's state-of-the-art. Hydrogen-powered, AI-controlled. Keeps us out of trouble.

BILLY BONES: Aye, AI, eh? Clever contraption. Does she make a good cup o' grog?

DAN: Only if you're programmed to appreciate synthetic kelp ale.

Cleopatra looks up, a slight smile playing on her lips.

CLEOPATRA: His name is Hal. And he is far more capable than a simple beverage dispenser.

Suddenly, Black Jack’s jovial demeanor vanishes. He grabs Dan in a powerful hold, a wicked-looking knife appearing in his hand. Billy Bones simultaneously produces a similar blade and moves towards Cleopatra.

BLACK JACK: Enough o' the pleasantries, landlubbers! This ship is ours now!

Dan struggles, surprised by the sudden aggression.

DAN: What the .... Holy fuel cells?!

CLEOPATRA: Treachery!

JOHN: Jack! What are you doing?!

BLACK JACK: Followin' orders, Captain Longstride's orders! You'll hand over that map, the skull, and whatever gold you found, or your friends here get a taste o' steel!

Billy Bones shoves Cleopatra towards the exit.

BILLY BONES: Move it, fancy pants! You're comin' with us!

INT. CORRIDOR - ELIZABETH SWANN - CONTINUOUS

Black Jack drags Dan roughly down the corridor, Billy Bones pushing Cleopatra ahead of him.

DAN: Longstride? I should have known!

CLEOPATRA: You won't get away with this!

They reach a cargo bay on the Hispaniola, where SCOTT TREMAINE (40s, anxious, another member of Long John’s crew) is securing equipment. The pirates quickly overpower and tie him up alongside Dan and Cleopatra.

BLACK JACK: Three nice little hostages. Captain Longstride will be pleased.

INT. BRIDGE - ELIZABETH SWANN - MOMENTS LATER

John stands, stunned, as he watches the pirates, now back at the helm, begin to manipulate the controls. Black Jack grins triumphantly.

BLACK JACK: Farewell, Commander Storm! Enjoy your walk on the plank… metaphorically speakin'. Billy, get us out o' here!

Billy Bones engages the propulsion systems. The Elizabeth Swann begins to move, leaving John on the dockside.

JOHN (To the empty air): Hal? What’s happening?

HAL (V.O. - Calm, synthesized voice, seemingly only audible to John): Commander Storm. Black Jack and Billy Bones have forcibly taken control of the bridge. Mr Hawk, Doctor Cleopatra, and Crewman Tremaine have been taken as hostages aboard their vessel, designated ‘Hispaniola,’ now at anchor approximately five nautical miles to the northeast.

JOHN (Under his breath): Why didn’t you stop them, Hal? A taser burst would have sorted them out.

HAL (V.O.): Prioritizing the safety of Mr Hawk and Doctor Cleopatra. Initiating non-lethal countermeasures against the intruders at this juncture could have jeopardized their well-being. Allowing the illusion of control maintains a strategic advantage.

JOHN: Longstride… this has his stench all over it.

Suddenly, a mental voice, clear and distinct in John’s mind, cuts through his thoughts.

HAL (TELEPATHIC): Commander Storm. Longstride is communicating via ship-to-ship comms. He is addressing you directly.

John clenches his jaw, his hand instinctively reaching for a concealed weapon. A holographic display flickers to life in Storm's mind, showing a smug-looking JOHN LONGSTRIDE (60s, ruthless, scarred) on his own ship’s bridge.

LONGSTRIDE (On screen): Well, well, Commander Storm. Seems my… associates have paid you a little visit. A temporary change of ownership for your fancy hydrogen toy.

JOHN (Trying to remain calm): Longstride, you’re making a mistake. This will only end badly for you.

LONGSTRIDE (Laughing): Oh, I don't think so, Storm. Here’s the deal. You hand over the Aztec map, that golden skull you pilfered, and every shiny trinket you found in that cave. Do that, and I’ll release your little crew and even return your precious Elizabeth Swann… eventually.

Longstride’s eyes flick downwards, a predatory gleam in them.

LONGSTRIDE (CONT'D): Of course, accidents happen at sea, don’t they? Especially when there’s valuable cargo involved.

HAL (TELEPATHIC): Commander Storm. Longstride’s bio-signatures indicate a high probability of deception. His stated intentions regarding the hostages and the vessel are inconsistent with his physiological responses.

John’s face hardens. He knows Longstride is lying. The pirate wants the treasure and the Elizabeth Swann.

JOHN: You think I’m a fool, Longstride? You’ll take the treasure and try to sell my ship for scrap.

LONGSTRIDE (Smirking): You wound me, Commander. Such distrust! But time is wasting. Make your choice. The clock is ticking for your friends.

The transmission ends. John stares at the blank screen, his mind racing.

JOHN (To Hal, aloud): He’s not getting away with this.

HAL (V.O.): Agreed, Skipper. I have been continuously monitoring the intruders’ actions and the location of the Hispaniola. Preparations for retrieval are underway.

JOHN: Good. Let’s make sure Longstride regrets the day he set foot on my ship.

John turns, a determined glint in his eyes. He knows he has to play Longstride’s game for now, but he also knows Hal is his secret weapon. The rescue has already begun.

CUT TO BLACK

 

 

>>> SCENE 16

 

 

 

 

ABSTRACT: John Longstride orders Black Jack and Billy Bones to kidnap Dan Hawk and Cleopatra the pirates going onboard the Elizabeth Swann as supposed friend-lies - then capture and lock Dan and Cleopatra in the Hispaniola ship, now anchored in new location. The pirates tied up their new captives with Scott Tremaine, to be used as hostage leverage. Then, Jack and Billy steal the Elizabeth Swann. The pirates think they have control of the Swann, but in reality the onboard AI, Hal, allows that illusion, not wanting to Taser the illicit guests until Dan and Cleopatra are safely recovered. Hal alerts John Storm to these events telepathically via BioCore, when Longstride tips his hand, saying give us the map, the golden skull and cave contents and we'll release hostages on the Hispaniola and return the Elizabeth Swann. Of course he is lying. He plans to keep the Elizabeth Swann, and try and sell the ship, or parts of it on the black market.

 

 



 

 

 

HURRICANE IOTA NOVEMBER 2020 - Providencia (boat dock) and Santa Catalina were ravaged by extreme weather when heading into 2021.

The small Colombian island of Providencia was hit hard by the powerful Category-5 hurricane Iota, which caused severe damage to the majority of local’s homes and the already scant public infrastructure.

At that time, Colombia’s President, Ivan Duque, said it is the first Category 5 – the most serious of hurricanes – to hit the Andean nation in its history.

Providencia island had a population of 5,000 people and is part of the Archipelago of San Andres, Providencia and Santa Catalina located in the Caribbean Sea about 775km (481 miles) northwest of mainland Colombia. Geographically, it is closer to the central American country of Nicaragua.

 

The hurricane was first considered a Category 2 but just before passing Providencia it developed into a Category-5 tropical cyclone which NASA said can have wind speeds of up to 253km/h (157mph) and has the ability to cause catastrophic damage.

Neighbouring larger island San Andres also faced damage to its infrastructure, albeit less intense. Northern Colombian coastal cities, like Cartagena, have flooded and are battling high winds.

According to the United States Office of National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, 2020 has had the highest hurricane activity in the Atlantic since official records began in 1851.

 

 

 

 

 

PROLOGUE: ROYAL AFRICAN COMPANY - King Charles II, Royal Charter James Stuart II, transport goods from Africa: Bloody Triangle.

SCENE 1. THE BATTLE OF OCRACOKE - Lt Robert Maynard, Blackbeard's curse, beheading & torturous interrogation on the Adventure 

SCENE 2. EARTHQUAKE JAMAICA - Present Day - An earthquake hits Port Royal, disturbing the sunken city & Palisadoes cemetery.

SCENE 3. BLUE SHIELD ENGLAND - Blue Shield, Newcastle UK, UNESCO requests Storm catalogue underwater city UNEP World Heritage Site.

SCENE 3.1. SWASHBUCKLING - John tries out Dan's VR sword fencing program, then duel with real pirate cutlasses, Hal keeping score.

SCENE 4. HENRY MORGAN'S DEATH - Henry Morgan has a heart attack; funeral ceremony at Palisadoes cemetery, old Port Royal.

SCENE 5. SUNKEN CITY SURVEY - Present Day, Swann's sensors scan the ocean bed, revealing mausoleum former Governor of Jamaica.

SCENE 6. JUNE 1692 TSUNAMI - Jamaica, June 7th, an earthquake hits Port Royal, then a tsunami washes the pirate haven under the sea.

SCENE 6.1. GHOSTS BLACKBEARD & MORGAN  - Spectral figures cheer on John Storm as he searches Henry's Palisadoes crypt for clues.

SCENE 7. HENRY MORGAN'S COFFIN - John Storm & ROV, comes face to face with Henry's skeletal remains. Finds interesting wooden engraving.

SCENE 8. BBC JILL BIRD - London. John Storm's finds lost Henry Morgan's pirate remains. "And for those of you wondering, there was no treasure."
SCENE 9. OPERATION HISPANIOLA - British Geographical Society, & Royal Navy fund Lord Huntington's expedition to recover relics in the Caribbean.

SCENE 10. SHIP'S COOK - William Gray helps John Long's cut-throats to crew for Huntington's Hispaniola, Long a dab hand on the galley.

SCENE 11. ARCHAEOLOGICAL SOS - Huntington (BGS bigwig) asks John Storm for help with shipwreck survey - meet in the Caribbean, Haiti.

SCENE 12. SKELETON ISLAND - Intrigued by map proffered by Lord Huntington, John agrees to switch attention to location, to coast of Panama. .

SCENE 13. SANTA CATALINA - Colombian, Mexican, Panamanian, Nicaraguan patrols re: 'Satisfaction' & hunt for Aztec gold, Spanish Conquistadors.

SCENE 14. TREASURE ISLAND - Hurricane Iota erased map clues, Isla Providencia. Longstride believes location of Blackbeard's/Morgan's treasure.

SCENE 15. KIDNAP - Black Jack & Billy Bones kidnap Dan, Cleopatra - lock in Hispaniola with Tremaine. Hal alerts John to events via BioCore.

SCENE 16. DOUBLE CROSS - Maynard pact with Spanish Navy to blockade Caribbean to capture John & Swann. Longstride deal Aztec Golden Skull.

SCENE 17. BLACKBEARD'S CURSE - John retakes Swann, Hal immobilizes Black Jack and Billy Bones and rescues prisoners on Hispaniola.

SCENE 18. MORGAN'S TREASURE SHIP - John deciphers carving code helped Dan and Cybercore Genetica. Dives to find privateer's shipwreck.

SCENE 19. BILLION DOLLAR DEAL - John negotiates with Panama, Peru, Colombia, Ecuador & Blue Shield for % salvage based on wreck video.

SCENE 20. BLOCKADE RUNNER - Swann navigates through Spanish Armada & Royal Navy blockade in stealth mode, invisible to radar.

SCENE 21. BERMUDA TRIANGLE - Pirates head into Bermuda Triangle, Colombian Navy in pursuit: BBC Sky News. Never to be seen again.

 

 


 

John Storm and Elizabeth Swann get to Treasure (Skeleton) Island

 

 
 

 

  ON JOHN LONG'S ORDERS, BILLY BONES AND BLACK JACK KIDNAP CLEOPATRA, DAN HAWK AND SCOTT TREMAINE - TREASURE ISLAND - BLACKBEARD'S CURSE & PIRATES GOLD

 

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